![]() Given how excellent your writing abilities are, I hope far more player agency comes into future titles. IDK, go help Seren forage for more ingredients to make your allies stronger to break up the text bombardment? Just a small idea. ![]() Also, breaks between the text baths to maybe do something. ![]() If I expected it to be like TITS, Lilith's Throne or Ruin Me: I suppose I wouldn't be so hard on the text bath. I control next to nothing except a few choices, though they are super important yes. Then, there are so many games, that yours is just another one and until it reaches a certain level of popularity it will be really hard to grow.Ībout the game itself I have nothing to point out, like I said before I think you have some really good art style and really good ear for the sounds.My review: I love the characters, the art and everything, especially the harem as that makes or breaks a game like this and they are all a grand slam homerun and how they all come together around the MC and the world as a whole but what holds this back from joining my F95 mount rushmore is how kinetic this is (and dont be offended, this is a MINOR ISSUE). Having a team and expecting to reach certain goals in short time is not (in my opinion) the correct mindset, if you are doing the game for fun just focus on that, FUN, everything else is a bonus. I've noticed that many people stay away from RPGM games, yes I know your game looks more like a ren'py game but all the other people will just not touch it for being RPGM game, with so many games around they just move on, then you have the people who come looking for a "classic" RPGM game and are presented a ren'py look alike. I would have done something different though so here are my two cents on the subject. In any case, best of luck with your new venture, and perhaps someday you can come back and finish this game/story.Ĭlick to expand.Hey man, sad to know that you're considering to abandon the game, I really think that you have some skills. (Yes, my opinion, and we all know what opinions are worth, but still.) There really is no need for a walk-through as the game stands now, so a walk-through as a tier reward is basically meaningless. I really don't see much difference between a 1 and 2 dollar tier, your $5 will be your backbone supporters with a small to medium amount of $10 pledges. Most games, (and yes that is a broad statement), release a public version anywhere from 1 to 2 weeks after the Patreon version, yes some are longer, but due to sites like this, non-supporters rarely have to wait more then a week for an update to hit public. You might also want to look at your Patreon tier rewards. Of course more choices is more work / money spent doing branching, so it's a balancing act. ![]() I noticed a few times as well, when Seren was referred to as Sybil not sure if I missed something there or not, I get it when he calls Seren by his old consort's name.Īnyway, I think you've got the writing mostly down, just need more lewds, and maybe more choices. I prefer Action / Adventure, like say Evenicle. Not going to lie, I'm really not too into VN's. I enjoyed the story, but that's all it was to me, a story.
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